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Monday 24 June 2019

Fonterra

Date:  5 March 2018
Audience: Richie McCaw/Fonterra
Purpose: To persuade
Plan:


Introduction:
  • Reason 1: Recycling
    • Explanation 1: the used catrons
    • become roof tile and books
  • Reason 2: Energy
    • Explanation 2: We drink our milk
    • after lunch and it gives us an energy boost for the
    • end of the day, so we can pay attention better
  • Reason 3: Healthy
    • Explanation 3: Milk has lots of
    • vitamins to help us grow and stay strong
Conclusion:


Remember to:
  • Single space words
  • Proper punctuation
  • at least 2 reasons and and explanation for each.


Script:
Evelyn: I hope he comes our school.
Olivet: yeah.
Eman: Oh, hey guys!
Olivet, Evelyn: Hey!
Eman: Did you hear about Richie
McCaw Coming to 4 schools in a helicopter with milk?
Evelyn: Yes.
Olivet: We Were just talking about it!
Eman: Oh, thats cool! I was wondering if WE ALL can write
a letter to Richie, and see if he will come to our school.
Evelyn: So, we are going to do it for the WHOLE school?
Olivet: I guess that’s what she means…
Eman: Mmhm!
Olivet, Evelyn: Oh no…


Eman: oh well, we’ll just do it!


Evelyn: dear richie mccaw,
Eman: we would like you to come to our school
with milk because,
Olivet: we enjoy drinking milk,
Evelyn: we can recycle,
Eman: and, milk helps our bones get STRONGER
everyday we come to school and drink after playing in
the boiling sun
Olivet: we would enjoy having you at our school, we hope you
come!]


Evelyn: by evelyn
Eman: by Eman
Olivet: umm… don’t forget about Olivet.


Eman: Hope you enjoyed our little skit!
EVERYONE: Bye!!!!









Matariki

Friday 17 May 2019

Fishing for the future

Title:Fishing for the future

The ocean can be a dangerous place.
Luckily there are a few things we can do to
make it safer. Wearing life jackets and looking after our seabirds.


Once you fish you got to remember to
wear a life jacket
on a boat, kayak or a canoe,
and when you see seagulls flying around
get your binoculars and look
at the sky at
seagulls, that means that fish are
nearby in the water,
and that’s a good sign that fish are nearby.
when the seagulls come for
your boat get a bucket full of
water and splash the water on
them and scare them away.
SOS-save our seabirds from plastic
bottles and different plastic things,
and you got to help our birds and stop
putting plastic things in the sea and
ocean because it is
killing them when they eat it.



By Evelyn Tuliakiono


    

Wednesday 8 May 2019

Explanation Writing: How to feel calm

Monday 29th April 2019

Purpose:
Audience:
Plan:


Tuesday 30th April 2019

How to feel calm
When you are feeling angry you just feel like slamming things,
punching the carpet, throwing things
and kicking stuff,


When you are angry, you go to KitKat area.


After that take a deep breath in and out, smell the fresh air
outside, have cuddles with your family
and watch a movie from
Netflix too, even you can have a sleep, play some video games
too or hangout with your best friend. but try to think happy things,
like Mcdonalds, Kfc,
wendys, drawing, playing games, tag or hide n’ seek.


once your all happy feel calm and relaxed, look outside of the window
and hear the birds sing.




I hope you enjoyed your time doing this!

Evelyn  


Monday 8th April 2019


Board of Trustees
Papakura Central School


Dear Board Of Trustees,


Thank you for these
beautiful LG tv’s they work
really good and they are tall too,
the remote is really hard
to control on the tv, but it’s not
hard for me though cause
I have the same tv but it doesn’t
have the stand under
the LG tv, and the tv’s are well designed.


When you turn the tv’s on it comes
up with nice
backgrounds like a slideshow and I
really like the LG tv’s,
the other classes in PCS would love
to have the LG tv’s too.


Warm Regards,


Evelyn